DVD commentary
This is my DVD commentary and what I shall be talking
about is what is done in my short film with Robbie, Craig and Jack. What I was
responsible for was the mise-en-scene which was very important throughout our
film.
There was only to
characters throughout the whole film. One was the antagonist and the other was
the protagonist. With the miss-en-scene at the start is you see the
protagonist walking down the alleyway just coming back from somewhere but as he
is walking you can see from the shots of the dirty and not very clean dirty
alleyway suggesting that this alleyway might not be safe or right for him to be
currently walking down. As he continues to walk down the alleyway you can see
his clothes and his body language which all seem normal and does not suit
him walking down the dirty and dark alleyway. Also one of the shots is of what
is spouse to be a CTTV camera meaning that it is last time he will be seen by
anything or anyone after starting to walk down the alleyway.
As he continues to
walk down the alleyway it gets darker and dirtier showing that as he walks
further down the alleyway it seem that it might be foreshadowing what is going
to happen to him soon. But he still seems pretty calm and normal walking down
this part because this is shown by his body language again; the reason is
because he is walking up straight and at a normal pace like he was when he
first started walking down the alleyway.
Then out of nowhere at the corner of the dirty and dark alleyway
the shrouded antagonist comes out from the side and hits the protagonist across
the face with a stick but you barely see the antagonist, the reason for this is
because we wanted to make the audience think why would some just randomly hit
the protagonist across the face with a stick. The only thing you saw the stick
and the legs of the antagonist. After all this you next have a POV of the protagonist
laying on the floor with shrouded antagonist comes into the shot wearing a
creepy white mask, a hooded black jacket and pure black trousers, the reason he
was dressed like this was to make him look dark and shrouded by the mask and
hood but make him also memorable by his bright white mask which didn’t have one
piece of dirt on it even though he was waiting done a dark and dirty alleyway.
After you have a scene where the shot is fuzzy and dazed showing
that he is barely conscious the protagonist is being dragged down somewhere but
you don’t see anything but his feet so this makes the audience think that
protagonist is going to a different setting but they don’t know where he is
going so it’s a mystery to the audience and builds up the suspense.
Finally after this you see the protagonist wake up in a forest but
it seems like a also sunset so it seem like he has been unconscious for a while
also he is covered in blood on his hands, face and his jumper he was wearing
seems to be missing as well, but soon after he wakes up he is chased by the
antagonist but he seems like he is going to escape but he turns around and
trips, the shots cut to show a sharp stump on the floor and next after you seem
him impaled by it. As he screams in pain you see the antagonist slowly walk up
to the protagonist screaming in agony on the floor, you can see by his body language
that he is pleased by it and that is the end of the whole sequence.